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Comic TLK IV Returns- preview by WelpPwr Comic TLK IV Returns- preview by WelpPwr
This is the preview I talked about in the journal. 8D
(This took me way too long to make...)
I'm planning to make this comic, but I can cancel it if nobody likes it.

If you like it or not please comment. :)


The Lion King (C) Disney
Simone & other lions from the Heart Pride (C) Me
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Sumi1978 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aside from the grammar corrections there is one spelling error I caught. It should be unfair, not unfaire.

And the anatomy could use a little work with the back legs and the 'thumbs' on the outside of the leg. They should be on the inside.
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WelpPwr Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
First, thank you! :)
Jep, I know.
I've been working on the anatomy since then, if you look at my gallery can you see since when I realised I drew the 'thumbs' wrong. :)
Would you mind to give critique to [link] ? 8D That's more recent and would help a lot. ;D
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Sumi1978 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I apologize for the critique. I did look at your gallery after seeing this comment and the anatomy is better in more recent drawings.
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WelpPwr Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It's okay. :)
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Ponygeck Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist
gooood! 8D
It looks awesomee!
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WelpPwr Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks! 8D
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Ponygeck Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist
yw!
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davidfenton1 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks like it could be pretty interesting...
Only real issue is "And it all became even worser"
I think the proper grammar would be "And then it all became even worse"
Also, "I've could never imagined that it all started here..."
Should be "I never could have imagined that it all started here..."

If English isn't your first language, I apologize, but hopefully this helps.
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WelpPwr Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ok, I'm not gonna make the same grammar faults. :) Thanks! 8D (Yes, English isn't my first language. :))
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Servali Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh, I liek it 8D
MAKE MOAAAAAAAAAAAR :iconyayyplz:
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WelpPwr Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yay! 8D Thanks!

Moar is coming soon! 8D (Ik heb part 1+2 van de epiloog ingescant en deel 3 is bijna afgeschetst en deel 4 ben ik mee begonnen en dan begint the story!)
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Servali Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Woohoo, ik kan niet wachten 8D
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WelpPwr Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
8D
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Deathsteed Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it looks good! and I like it so I would read it o3o
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WelpPwr Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm glad you like it. 8D
Thanks!
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