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And the anatomy could use a little work with the back legs and the 'thumbs' on the outside of the leg. They should be on the inside.
Jep, I know.
I've been working on the anatomy since then, if you look at my gallery can you see since when I realised I drew the 'thumbs' wrong.
Would you mind to give critique to [link] ? 8D That's more recent and would help a lot. ;D
It looks awesomee!
Only real issue is "And it all became even worser"
I think the proper grammar would be "And then it all became even worse"
Also, "I've could never imagined that it all started here..."
Should be "I never could have imagined that it all started here..."
If English isn't your first language, I apologize, but hopefully this helps.
MAKE MOAAAAAAAAAAAR