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First by looking&referencing screenhots and later by drawing my own poses. (I can make a tutorial how I draw in LK style if you want? )
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This is my first critique, so bear with me here.
For firsts, I think this is a really wonderful picture, and I really like how you captured the scene of it. Pretty creative to also give Kopa a chance to shine, too!
I think the mouths may be a bit slanted, and the chins on some of the characters being a little big. As an example, here is a screencap of Vitani - [link] - As you can (hopefully) see, her chin is pretty small comparedto the rest of her muzzle. The same goes for Kiara, but I have to say her chin (in the original movie) gets bigger as she gets older.
If you also notice, their "thumbs" are on the "inside" of the paws. Take a look at your own hand - You see the thumbs being on the right side for the left hand, and the left side for the right hand. It also words like that with lions. c: Here's a screenie which you can reference for paws at an angle, if it helps; [link]
I think Simba's mane may also be a little.. Bright? As well as above his eyes, which should probably be a little more brownish. Kiara is also pretty bright orange, and Kovu's earrims aren't black - Just a really dark shade of brown. [link] His neck also might need to be a tiny bit thinner near his bottom jaw.
If possible, some textures on the grass might be helpful, too, so it doesn't look like they're standing/sitting on 'painted rock', if that isn't too much of an offensive way to put it.
Overall, it's a really nice picture, and I really like the way you managed to fit the "main characters" into it! It's really good, and Vitani looks really cute!~
Hopefully this wasn't too harsh, as it is my first critique, but I hope it helped a little bit atleast.
I love your Nala and Simba really adorble but Kiara is too much orange furred rather than her parents. ^^
I really impressed how you added Mufasa and Sarabi , really feels like in the movie and how you mixed the characters from the first and second movie.
I'm really proud of your work and I hope you will improve a lot (:
I hope you will be a great artitst and your abilites will be better , I'm saying its really but really good peice of picture (:
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